I Am Woman Forum Does your story need a review?

If anyone wants a review of a STORY send me a message, I'm not as strong in the poem department.

I tend to take a critical look at things like an editor would, so it won't be the kind of review that just gushes over how good or bad it is, although if it's really good I'll be sure to mention it :)

I would definitely love your opinion, I think I have two stories up on my page. i just recently started short stories and I do not know how good I am at it yet haha. So thank you in advance if you go check them out. "Late Night Office Hours" and "The Little Girl That Will"