Novel Critique circle Forum My book: Torah

Thanks for checking out my post.  My story is quite lengthy and has a few different elements that I feel makes my story more interactive and different.  It is just over 100 k words, with pictures such as newspaper articles, poems, and posters.  (Some need a professional re work, but the idea is what I wanted to get across.)

The history of the world in my book is very different to the one we all know. America, is not called America, and there were no world wars in the early 20th century.  What you have now is a different UK who continues to build upon its growing Empire.  The story is focused on three characters, spanning decades.  with the Narrator who you wont forget in a hurry!  It has some strong language, some graphic scenes and as I am British, it has some slang along the way.  

If anyone has a bit of time on there hands I would love if you could read it.  The book is called Torah.  the link is here: