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Reviews Please! :)

2 Years Ago

I've been inconsistently working on my story Possibly Narrie for years. I'm not sure where to go. I want something epic and full of emotion and magic fantasy, but I don't know how to execute that :,D

Here's a link to the book. I have the first 13 chapters written. Constructive criticism/feedback is super helpful!