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First Round Robin!!

12 Years Ago


Normally I would ask for opinions and ideas, but just to kick it off, I'm going to go ahead and start. Feel free to begin your own.
To start simple, I thought we could do a poem about nature. Something everyone experiences, nothing too specific or difficult. So I'll write the first line and we can do from there. You can also modify the previous line. Let your imagination take this where it will.

The colors of the crunchy leaves beneath my feet add warmth to the cool air biting my nose and cheeks

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Autumn leaves sashay to the ground.  I take them in, enjoy the sound of children playing in piles of yellow and gold.

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The dripping of the morning dew as they fall upon the swirling leaves;
Like a tear-drop from your eyes, they touch my soul in unsaid ways;
and only you know the reason why.

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Your eyes are as clear as the blue sky; no clouds there

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Then why do i see those lingering doubts in your misty eyes which should have been sunshine clear. Do you trust me dear?

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CHANGE TO LAST LINE:
Yet I see those lingering doubts in your misty eyes appear. Why are they no longer sunshine clear?