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New Draft. Rise of the Dead: Prologue

12 Years Ago


Thanks to Lou Dobbs and Weaver, there's a new draft of my prologue. Let me know what you guys think.

Re: New Draft. Rise of the Dead: Prologue

12 Years Ago


Lolz, I think Lou Dobbs is a news anchor ;)

Re: New Draft. Rise of the Dead: Prologue

12 Years Ago


A few more corrections:
"crucial to humanities survival" - "humanity's"
"but that a commodity" - dropped word - "but that is a commodity"
Don't use bold type for "The End."

I like the use of a frame story at the beginning to give context to the flashback narrative.