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Reviews?

16 Years Ago


I'm looking for some reviews on my story. I would really appreciate any input. If you're crazy with boredom, check me out.


Immortalis: Prologue-- "I felt his grip tighten around my ankle as he dragged me down the hallway. Clawing at the hardwood floor, the splinters stuck my fingers. Tears spilled down my cheeks in vain. There was no one to save me."

Sticks and Stones: P:1 CH:1-- "Alekzander Macalister was nothing but a field name, an alias, a nickname, pasted on his driver’s license, a series of letters smudged across his birth certificate, which dubbed him normal. In the cell block, the guys called him Alek, but he’d come to understand that it was nothing but a handle, a precaution, in case something got out of hand in society. With one misstep, one slip, he became Alekzander, the rich, spoiled twenty-five-year-old from New York."