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Can someone review my story?

12 Years Ago


Hey I would really appreciate some feedback on my story called 'New Generation', its about three teenage siblings that are a new generation in the armed forces being a mix of black ops, delta, green berets, and Elite Rangers...they are put on a 'vacation' to play bodyguards to the top General's children...they will go to three different countries, and maybe while at it they will learn the meaning of feelings....

Please review my story I beg you...& thank you to those who review it :D