Want Some Reviews? Forum Will Review Work - Please Mess..

To anyone and everyone who would like a review of their work, I would be happy to do so. I have a fairly significant background in writing and literature and i would be happy to use my experience to give you the best feedback possible.  Feel free also to check out my pieces and write a review if you wish, they're always appreciated!

Hi!

Please review my work, "Sedate the Animal in the Pen". :)

Thank you!
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Hey.

Me please! I've just joined today as well and I'm originally from Wattpad :)

Hi! I have just joined now.Could you please review my work " Reborn and trapped ". Thank you Srijith kn

Hey! I am looking for reviews on the outline for my stage play (first draft, at least). I am gathering beta readers for it, but I am also posting on a few groups. The work doesn't have a title yet, either, so any suggestions there would be helpful.

Hello Hailey,

Hi, I would really appreciate it if you could review either my short story Wear the Faces or the first chapter of my book Mechanical Hearts. I would return the favour and review something of yours. 

Hi! Could you look at my book Thief? Im trying to make a writers voice that appeals to my own ADHD (quick explanations, changing paces, people's personalities have more detail than the enviroment because I really dont care what kind of wood the barstool was made of or if Bob has black hair or blonde; basically the opposite of J.K.Rowling)

I want to make a writers voice that makes someone feel and see the story instead of being told it,if you know what i mean? I need alot of help with it

Hi! Will you please review my works? Particularly the Capture the Target series!

Hi there. I just joined this site a few hours ago, and I posted the first chapter of my novel in progress, Doomsday By Design. Would you like to review it?

I'd like it if you could review my work. a lot of it hasn't been reviewed yet, or only has one review. It would be a great help if you could review it. Thank you! ^__^

Hi! i would be really grateful if you could just review my sister's only poem,THE LAZY ME.

I'd love a review of my first chapter.

I really hope that you will review my first short story and I appreciate it.

Hi All,

Hi please review my work! it's been my pleasure for you to read it.

Hello Hailey,

Hello! If this offer is still open I'd appreciate a review on my most recently posted poem, "9 Year Storm". I'm in the revision process for it now so I'm really in need of fresh eyes to help me gauge if I'm on the right track. Thank you for your time!