Want Some Reviews? Forum New series looking for feedbac..

So here's the deal, I'm currently working on a graphic novel/comic called The Islands of Overworld, and I'd love to get some feedback! I have 16 chapters written, currently only 5 uploaded. If you're looking for a sweet, fantasy story to get into, then I think you may like it! :)

I'm mainly looking for advice on story, characters, pacing, etc. (I don't really want much feedback on descriptions or grammar since it will be visual. You can give such feedback if so inclined, but, honestly, I'll probably ignore it!)

If you have any advice on how to get it published, or where to publish it, I'd greatly appreciate it!

I'm new to posting on this website, but it seems like a good place to improve my story!

Thank you!