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Hey, I just posted a new story. I would really like some feedback. If you like stories with mysterious deaths and shady characters, then read it. Its called, "Fire in the Neighborhood" and its about a house being set on fire and only one man knows the true cause. Its alot better than it sounds (hopefully) and I would really like a few people to review it if possible. Here's a link to all my work: