a gay love story Forum I would love a review

I have recently added more chapters to my book - Flapper Girls, it is about two friends falling in love, but evil wants them punished for their sins. Will God save the lesbians or let evil win?

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“My lesbian translator must be on the fritz. Is that code for your period? Instead of calling it an Alexandria Tampon how about a bloody Mary?” He snaps his fingers and continues, “This bloody Mary is giving me the cramps or Damn you, bloody Mary for ruining my sex life.” Robert Marshall, Flapper Girls