Tyler Duckworth

Posted 16 Years Ago

what does that toothpick taste like?

Posted 16 Years Ago

You've been chewing on that toothpick for ages.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Yep
I know what you mean. I suppose "The Kiss" could have gone one way or another, but it was written for someone, so I guess its the cliche soulmate!x

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your reviews, really appreciate the constructive thoughts, makes me think harder!

Posted 16 Years Ago

wow sir... seriously... wow...
your comments on my pieces have floored me.
i just wanted to come by and thank you personally for taking the time to read my pieces and sound so in awe of them... i read two of your things last night and commented and thought your name in my message box was gonna be "i dont understand your comments on bit" haha.

anyways... thank you.
[oh... and the maths exam thing... i know that makes me sound young though it wasnt my intention... im trying to come up with something that is mundane and nothing but that back in the day everyone could identify with...]

thanks a lot of your kindness and praise =)

Posted 16 Years Ago

I want to end up as a polished writer. I want to be able to have a collection of my writings worth showing the public population.

And I'm taking your reviews with no offense, no hard feelings. I asked for it, and I'm getting it. That's why makes you a great critic.
It's not like your totally shredding me, and telling me to crawl into a hole and die.

Posted 16 Years Ago

*takes a deep breath*

I love your honesty. Really, truly. Thank you. And, I refer you to my previous comment.

I think my growth is coming along...slowly, surely. But it's happening all the same.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Yes, you are being hard on me, and I give you respect in that. I'm trying....I really am. Ive taken to writing something new every night, trying to break out of a box...I am pushing myself....

and yes, it is wistful, hopefully, one day soon, I will reach my goal, and attain greatness.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Just wanted to drop in and say hello! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thanks so much for getting back to me so soon. The review was eye-opening (as were ones from others who seconded your motion of not understanding)
I'm considering staging a re-write for the general public. My problem is, is that I know exactly what each line means because it has direct correlation with situations going on.
You helped a great deal. Again, thank you.
Love-
Evie Lovechild