Jennifer Welker

Posted 14 Years Ago

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The Sunflower
by James Montgomery

Eagle of flowers! I see thee stand,
And on the sun's noon-glory gaze:
With eye like his thy lids expand,
And fringe their disk with golden rays;
Though fix'd on earth, in darkness rooted there,
Light is thine element, thy dwelling air,
Thy prospect heaven.

So would mine eagle-soul descry,
Beyond the path where planets run,
The light of immortality,
The splendour of creation's sun;
Though sprung from earth, and hast'ning to the tomb
In hope a flower of paradise to bloom,
I took to heaven.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thanks for your review of "On your Stoop."

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thanks for your review.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Oh, by the way, I didn't actually rate your poem. I think it is offensive to an author even if you give them 5 stars. Who am I to judge the quality?

Posted 16 Years Ago

heya thank you for the review. send me something to read...

Posted 16 Years Ago

thanks alot for reading through it anyway

Posted 16 Years Ago

Cool...the change is fantastic...yay!, much better *smile*

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hey thanks for the add, i'll try to get around to reviewing some of your work later on tonight.

Posted 16 Years Ago

thank you for the review darling, i might take you up on that dare ^.~

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thanks very much for your review - i was despreate to get someone's reaction on that poem...and yours was very generous :-)