http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/FaerieGorgeous The original writings of author Kettie Leah en-us Copyright 2009 Aresta Enterprise LLC 1258775324 Aresta RSS Generator 15 The Confession http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/409450/ I'm very unsure about this chapter, because I wanted to create a little comic relief; sort of ease the tension that I'm building up. However I'm not sure whether it's too much, or whether I am properly conveying the scenario picture. 38324600-1224948698.gif http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/333674/ Instead of dragging Crys straight to the underworld, I decided to add a little stop inbetween, so that there could be a brief pause, and a sincere focus on Crys' emotions in dealing with all that has happened, and her friendship relationship with Drake. 38324600-1224948698.gif http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/333673/ Chapter 3's changes are the bomb diggity, in my opinion. I thought that in my previous attempts, the Restok appeared to be more of the mindless bumbling idiots, and I actually wanted to create a malicious, intelligent, diabolical nemesis. I hope that I ha 38324600-1224948698.gif http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/333671/ In chapter 2 you can see the major storyboard changes taking place. Someone suggested that Drake was careless in delaying their action over a period of several days, that if he knew the danger he should be more impatient, and so I tried to shorten the day 38324600-1224948698.gif http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/333667/ The first chapter hasn't changed very much; most changes become more evident in the later chapters. 38324600-1224948698.gif http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/333665/ This is the 3rd Draft of Vame Haven. Over the past few months I have been reworking and reforming my initial idea. 38324600-1224948698.gif http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/333661/ Something I wrote based upon a dream I had. It was like a sequence dream I dreamed three nihtes in a row, so I thought it was worth putting into words. 09918800-1205547690.jpg http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/233957/ 17670200-1203582866.jpg http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/219888/ Based upon a true story.... me... yesterday.... 14813600-1203557658.gif http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/219762/ 90945700-1202756504.gif http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/211428/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210627/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210624/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210622/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210618/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210615/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210614/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210611/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210609/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210606/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210603/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210599/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210597/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210593/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210588/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210586/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210585/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210584/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210583/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210581/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210577/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210574/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210573/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210572/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210571/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210570/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210569/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210568/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210567/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210565/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210564/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210562/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210560/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210559/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210558/ This is the mid-point of my journey between Pirate Island and Pearl Harbour. http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210556/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210553/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210551/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210547/ http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FaerieGorgeous/210491/