William

William

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About Me

Hello, my name is William and I'm a write-aholic.

My first poem ever was written in January 2009, so I'm still pretty rough. Nothing is perfect, but I'm addicted to writing, and I do enjoy doing it, so I won't be stopping anytime soon.

I'm willing to critique work, so if you have a piece that you're not sure about, just ask, and I'll do my best to give you a full-length, in-depth review/critique. But I'll do my best to be frank and true--I don't appreciate sugar-coating--so be warned. I've been really busy recently, though, so it might take me a bit to get to it.

I'm a cuddly, praise-motivated sort of creature. xD If you like one of my poems, I'd really love to know it. Not to sound cliched and desperate, but a lot of the time, I do end up wondering if my writing is any good.

In poetry, I tend not to capitalize--it's a personal choice, because I believe it helps the flow. I don't think any "i"s in the place of "I"s are going to detract from the poem. xD Please try to be understanding. Thank you.


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Posted 5 Years Ago


Thank you very much for the lovely review. :)

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Changes made. :D

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks for the review. I have started thinking of an alternative for the shoe-part, hahaha. :)

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thank you SO much for the reviews! I really appreciate it. :)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


I just finished it, if you're interested.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thank you, I might consider lengthening it, when I read your comment and re-read the poem, I agreed with your comment. I just kind of pounded it out, so I will be going back to it. :) Thanks again~

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks for reading~

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thank you for the reviews. I'm not so adept at creating insanely ironic twists, though I do attempt to from time to time, they can be very entertaining, and leave the reader tense, caught off gaurd.


I enjoy your work, so Thanks again, dear. ;)

~des

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Yeah it's bizzar! I have been in love with certain peices I have read and rated 100/100 and even whn being the only reviewer, the rating will ALWAYS sit at 92. some odd number. I don't know why that's the case but it is peculiar... and not reliable to gauge by.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


That it is ^^