Jeremy R. Lopez

Jeremy R. Lopez

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About Me

Currently im 19 years old, but that will change soon. I was never into writing when I was younger. A huge imagination was one thing that turned me away froms other peoples thoughts. I keep my own stories to myself, write some out, and play around with all the ideas. My feelings trigger most of my writing, from ups and downs, I never know what I will come up with next.


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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for reading and for the review, Jeremy! I greatly appreciate all feedback. Hope you have a great weekend. :)

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Hi jeremy! thanks for joining and welcome, feel free to share your work/thoughts ideas with the group, ciao!

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Posted 17 Years Ago


thank you so much for the review dear. i appreciate it greatly! ^_^

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Posted 17 Years Ago


you're very welcome, it was worth the read ;) and thank you as well!

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Posted 17 Years Ago


your welcome Jeremy,
---MIshel
Kai

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Posted 17 Years Ago


dont you love that though?! when you start out with one topic and at the end your surprised at what you have accomplished i think its amazing

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the review. She was a wonderful cat. A truly, TRULY wonderful cat. How I miss her so... And how I live with out her... amuses me. :( x

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Hey no problems with it rhyming, that is great. Something I oft can't accomplish myself. Everyonce and awhile it works, but for me I have always stuck to the free form for the most part. Try rewording that beginning somehow, leave in the thing talking about how the "Fear consumes you," I don't know just play with it, the form is fine and the rhyme scheme holds true pretty much through, and hahahaha I just inadvertantly rhymed.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the comments, and review I appreciate it, and also nice to meet ya.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


hey thanks much for the review!!
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