I Wanna Throw "I Love You"'s In Her Face

I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face, like

baby move in with me cause' 

my closet has too much space for just one set of clothes.

And if it were up to me that is how it would be,

her and me, happy

ever after,

but she ain't no dummy model she

has a mind of her own

so I hold my love in my hand a little longer.

I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face, like

baby it's gotta be just me cause'

there is no one else I can see myself with.

Because the sun reminds me of the blonde of her dreads

so I wake up to her each morning,

and the moon, the moon reminds me of the shine in her smile

so she looks upon me from the night sky and cradles me in slumber.

But that is just part of a beautiful reminder

so I hold my love in my hand a little longer.

I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face, like

baby, " Will you marry me?" cause'

from the moment we first kissed I imagined saying

I DO.

And if it were up to me it would be her and me and

our first baby but

I'm too young and

She's not ready,

so I hold my love in my hand a little longer.

I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face, but

I'm afraid she'll turn her head away.

Reviews

[F.Gentil]

I want to throw I love you's in yo face, because this is amazing. It touches me so deeply because me and my love are 17 years apart and I swear for the longest time my hand was the hand he was holding. Seriously, three years later and now I'm throwing the Love You's-- like baby, I am moving in, your closet is too big , I need to put my stuff there! lol. I am in love with this poem I have to share it with him. Amazing job love. AMAZING!

[sivan]

thanks you made me smile for the morning..glad it affected you so

[Sami Khalil]

"I wake up to her each morning,

and the moon, the moon reminds me of the shine in her smile

so she looks upon me from the night sky and cradles me in slumber.

But that is just part of a beautiful reminder"
A splendid read and write...Bravo...:)

so I hold my love in my hand a little longer.




I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face,

[sivan]

Thanks!! i too love the line : I wanna throw "I Love You" 's in her face

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[writingurl14]

wow i can imagine what you are feeling! so sad but yet so in love! this is great! wonderful job!

[sivan]

Thank you... yeah its like ying and yang of being in love...

[writingurl14]

yup... :) well i hope it works out

[sivan]

so do i but it has been a long and rough 3 year road so the tyres are a bit worn out metaphorically speaking

[writingurl14]

yea... know how you feel...