Two Hearts

A poem demonstrating love at first sight

TWO HEARTS

She walked through the doors my heart stood still long blond hair waving in front of her ocean blue eyes the feeling constricts the heart breathlessness and suddenly air holds no importance 

My heart stops beating my eyelids unable and unwilling to blink encase this angelic beauty is a mirage the feeling of love grasps 

feeling drunk without a drink

messages and calls exchange hours of days seem to pass with ease

young loves dream unbreakable and immortal

losing contact but never forgetting the love of the one who holds my heart

She sees him standing in trio staring straight at her and wonders what’s this feeling of constriction on her heart 

speaking to the trio this stranger says nothing why is this engaging look so overwhelming I don’t want this stare to end

a message from the stranger from a third party soon appears but the number opens a door to communication seeing this stranger standing near a thirst factory she strokes him to her surprise she hears a moan 

this sound pleases and in future rein acts the tone

young loves dream unbreakable and immortal

losing contact but never forgetting the love of the one who holds her heart

6 years pass since the flame was ignited and 6 months to this day since true love blossomed was it fate was it destiny were the angels lending a hand

never forgetting constant reminders brought this match together hearing songs remembering birthdays and knowing true happiness can only come from eachother 

THESE TWO HEARTS BEAT AS ONE

THESE TWO SOULS SHARE ONE LOVE

THIS ONE LOVE WILL LAST FOREVER

Author's Note

I wrote this poem a few years ago and only recently after being dumped I decided to read it and submit please be honest and thank you for reading

Reviews

[Cynically]

This was really good.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

nice write good flow I really felt the emotion in this. Sounds like you know your own heart which is a rare thing in this world today. I cant imagine you being dumped her loss I personally don't know any guys who write poetry but if I did it would be so hard for me not to fall for them

[steph]

Now I really like this poem all technical emotional and spiritual aspects fufilled. this one is going in my favorites

[Cherrie Palmer]

nice flow, good rhyme, lovely poem

[A]

Your love must have been so deep, you are really talented, loved the ending and the whole poem, this one is amazing really, keep up the good work!

[morningstar]

this one is pretty interesting, it was so descriptive and i felt like i was there just standing in the back round watching this all happen. really nice poem

[Dilan Gray]

I love it. I can imagine everything so well, your descriptions are amazing. You are a great writer! I really like your poems.

[Frankie Nguyen]

I love your poetry. It all seems to bring an emotion that I have felt before. I can relate. I enjoy reading them. I could read your poetry all day. Never stop writing. I love how I can relate and see. It paints a picture for me.

i really enjoyed this poem, i could really connect with it. breath-taking.

[Poeticadia]

I love the pace and breathlessness of this poem... it mirrors the emotion expressed in the words. Only point i would make.. 'third party' feels like it doesn't fit within the domain of this poem.