Opened Gates

A lighter version to Locked gates where my heart is ready to love again

Opened Gates 

A warmth now emits from this once blackened heart

coal has been shattered, A diamond unmasked 

Joy, laughter, happiness I relinquish my chain

One b***h wont destroy my love wont refrain

Fairytale romance my goal I admit 

I’ve dealt with heartache nearly a Vitim to its pit 

Loves young dream warmth parallel to the sun

Answer me this will you be the one?

A question I ask a response I’m owed

my heart is the cattle 

you are my Goad 

Author's Note

The somewhat lighter version to locked gates please give honest reviews

Reviews

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

This is really quite nice. I like the positive strength of it!

[Dilan Gray]

OMG I LOVE IT!!!! So clever and wonderful!!! Beautifully written and I love the images hun! Great job!