I know He's there

I know He's there

A Poem by {A}shley {B}lack @-;-
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A poem about finding out the truth

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I Know He’s There 

We are at that place I wished we wouldn’t ever be
when we remain just friends our tie has been cut free

You tell me how we will still talk 
and meet up from time to time
but how many other ex’s have you fed this line

So we part ways and sure enough In contact we do stay
but then it starts being different our friendship it does fray

Messages are few and far between and this does frustrate
after breaking my heart I offer to you my friendship on a plate

How dare you toy with my emotions 
how dare you treat me this way
I’m giving you chance to remain a friend 
I’m owed an explanation and I think its time you pay

The message is replied and the truth soon does arise
“I have hurt you so much so I’m stopping with the lies”

Pain, Anger and Aggression
As I put my fist through the door
How could you string me along
you self-righteous f*****g w***e  

Ruby droplets stain my clothing 
 You crushed all my belief in you
 A lie right from the start
all the times you weren’t with me 
meeting him was your art 

So now I know what’s with the distance 
I laid my heart out bare
now cover it from you 
Because I know he’s there 

Now A choice I must make do I go around?
I’ll let you my readers decide where my feet are bound

© 2011 {A}shley {B}lack @-;-


Author's Note

{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
This is a participation poem so you decide where I go with this I hope you like the first part please Give honest Reviews

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So descriptive, I can picture everything that's happening. You can really feel the emotion in this poem. Great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can really feel the emotion in this poem, it's very well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Incredible emotions, with a great Precision F-Strike in the middle. I think your poetry's improving a lot~ I really love the rhyme and flow of this one. Awesome!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is really good. I think it would be cool to throw in some other guy, and perhaps another ex. Anyway, its a nice poem with a good level of tension.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Forgiveness. Acceptance of what we can't control; people.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very powerful,and charged throughout with emotion...the bitterness and regret are brought out wonderfully. powerfully emotive piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"How could you string me along
you self-righteous f*****g w***e " strong emotions..and written straight from the heart..there are times when we go through a really tough phase and put it down in poetry..I can say this is one of those..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very strong poem and a strong statement being made
your a good writer and your little by little winning me over
As a fan. I hope you keep up the good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You can tell this is from the heart. That's always hard, the friendship after the break up. Especially if you still have feelings for the other person. :/

Posted 13 Years Ago



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{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
{A}shley {B}lack @-;-

Sheriffhales, Shropshire , United Kingdom



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I Am Ashley Black (an alter ego ) I have a dark mind when it comes to my poetry as the strongest emotions come from negative RETURNING- I have been distant from this site for a while but I am fina.. more..

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