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A Poem by {A}shley {B}lack @-;-
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A poem to unlock myself

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How obsolete past tortured nights seem
all past heartbreaks
leading to this wonderful dream
perhaps I've been tested 
to see how far I can be broken
to finally find true love
or are those words better not spoken?

Trust is an issue 
time will be needed
"allow for an exception" 
these words to my heart I pleaded

A lone wolf meets another
try not to reflect on the past
this lone wolf is a mother
this relationship has to last

too many times I've been wounded
by the words it's over
but this time it feels perfect
Is this wolf my clover?


© 2012 {A}shley {B}lack @-;-



Author's Note

{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
A short poem about starting a new relationship but being cautious

Please review and be honest

Thank you for reading as always

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its very nicely done...after few heart breaks we all feel hard to trust... doesn't come easily...
slowly with time i think , if the other person has the patience to let us learn to grow to trust them...then that relation can flourish to a new strong fulfilling one :)



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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its very nicely done...after few heart breaks we all feel hard to trust... doesn't come easily...
slowly with time i think , if the other person has the patience to let us learn to grow to trust them...then that relation can flourish to a new strong fulfilling one :)



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a tiny stop to the 'flow' at this line..>> "these words to my heart I pleaded", however it does not impede the read much...this is a beautiful poem with a powerful meaning....well done..

Posted 4 Years Ago


This poem has a very nice flow and tone to it. The mention of wolves makes it even better. All in all, I really liked this. The only part I didn't understand is the mention of clover, but I'm sure it makes sense.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nice and concise...I like the tone of the poem, when 'one lone wolf meets another'...good work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


After so many times of being hurt it's good to be cautious and yet doesn't your heart already know? Doesn't the pull forward tell you what you need to hear? I love this because it allows the wonder of love and the risk of it to be opened up in thoughts and in hearts desires.. xx

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful. Not only because of my immense love of wolves, but because this poem is written amazingly. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A nice short poem. The reader can sense the hesitation and uncertainty. As always the emotions are shown very well. Great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Kes
I love this.
You've picked a really powerful animal to throw into such a vulnerable situation, and I think that's brilliant. :)
Great work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


powerful emotions and images combine in this to create something unique and quite amazing.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
{A}shley {B}lack @-;-

Sheriffhales, Shropshire , United Kingdom



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I Am Ashley Black (an alter ego ) I have a dark mind when it comes to my poetry as the strongest emotions come from negative RETURNING- I have been distant from this site for a while but I am fina.. more..

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