Slow Motion

Intersting: I'm hurting, but I'm not bleeding yet.

 

My thoughts
are
just
fragments
of what
I can(’t)
say out loud.

   

My notebook.
My idea.
My problem.

My trust.

 

Mine.
Mine.
Mine.

 

painhurtpulsepulsepulse
letmeoutletmeoutgetmeout(!)

 

Tears again
falling
down
as if in

s l o w … m o   t    i     o      n . .  .    .

 

So, really.
What the (f**k) next?

 

Author's Note

Are the colors too much?

Reviews

[MandarinOranges]

very good and i feel that the colors are appealing. intresting layout. a lil confusing with the words running together, but overall a very well written poem.

[MissRed]

I like the colors. I also like the overall "design" of the poem. It really adds to the meaning.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

i like the colors and i like the prose. it is pretty good really