I'm sorry I don't know a damn thing about poetry except when it touches me, and this one does. The loss is almost overwhelming. Be brave and never, never let any one tell you to let go of love.
Gosh. Seriously; tears. I will probably read this one over and over and cry, because this is EXACTLY what my friend is going through right now, and it's tearing me up with burden. Listen... She's really, really in love with this guy, but because he's mixed, her father has taken everything she has away from her and is trying to force her to break up with the only guy she's ever trusted enough to stay with for more than a week. He's sweet, and the PERFECT guy for her. The timing of this is so perfect... ALL FOR ITS OWN PURPOSE. Very well written, and I love the cover art. One of my favorite movies, it is. :) Definitely one of my favorite stories. Delicately told, and easily capturing the story; I know about that. Thanks for being so talented!!
KH
I read it several times and its very good. It rings true from the adolescent point of view. From the adult point of view the love lives at the end and thus didn't slip from her fingers...ever again. I like your style. Like confessional anger, repentant yet gleeful, celebratory.
teach me how to love, but not the way most dream of.
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