No love

Nobody wants to see the struggle
only the reward,
they focused on the peace
forgot the struggle.
existence without intimacy
killed the tree that bear
the most fruit,



 eyes to see your beauty,
 hands to hold you,
these legs to run and capture you,
lips to collide majestic love between our faces,
fickle heart a home to wipe away your
running mascara,
soothe your soul in rainy days
a man`s love to excite that lil kid in you
to make your days worthwhile.
honesty to glorify
the heaven sent angel you are.
subliminally its a fallacy
the attitude and the heart is the truth.



Behind every great man is a women,
but look closer there`s only a shadow
much like happiness
 a fabrication.
its a two way street
two souls decide.

Reviews

[V]

Another lovable piece though maybe two notes on it (though a little meticulous, I know, sorry): the tree that bears the most fruit with the s (bear >bears) and woman in the first line of the last stanza instead of women, I'd write but other than that, it reads awesome again. You have a new fan, in a way. :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Hmm, this poem read so clear and was full of meaning! Enjoyed reading it!

[zunie frost]

Behind every great man is a women,
but look closer there`s only a shadow
much like happiness
a fabrication.
its a two way street
two souls decide.

really powerful words my friend
i can relate to this
great job

[Graggz]

thank you , your review is highly appreciated

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All very deep and full of emotion, dear poet. Beautiful artistry!