A Fairytale Dream Come True

A Fairytale Dream Come True

A Poem by Lisa
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A Fairytale Dream Come True

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Once upon a time in a fairytale so magical

there was a beautiful young princess

who lived in a castle nestled in the heart

of the most enchanted forest filled with emerald

green trees and autumn leaves of ruby,

amber brown, and yellow-orange with hues so golden.

 

This is not a story about a man with a golden

touch, or wizards and good witches with a magical

wand, or about a girl with a dog and ruby

red slippers. It’s a tale about a fairy princess

dreaming of a prince to capture her heart.

 

A whimsical fairy willing to share her heart,

she wears long braided curls in her golden

locks and has eyes of green like a pure emerald

stone. Her personality makes her a princess

so passionate and fair, her senses are so magical

and her lips of seduction are as red as a ruby.

 

Here comes her prince, he’s as rare as a ruby,

she yearns for him with every beat of her heart.

Her prince is the envy of every other princess.

Now is her moment, it is her golden

opportunity to share a wonderful and magical

life so precious, more precious than a stone of an emerald.

 

The prince’s chariot is adorned in gems of green emerald,

midnight blue sapphires, and the reddest stones of ruby.

He asks the princess to marry him with his own magical

words, to take his hand and his heart,

to be his bride and to live in a golden

palace where she will reside as his princess.

 

As she accepts his offer to be his princess,

he slides a ring on her finger aglow with an emerald,

with the band polished in 14 karat gold, so golden,

outlined with multiple stones in red ruby.

It’s a ring he designed for her right from his heart,

it’s a symbol of a lasting love so magical.

 

For this golden princess with eyes of emerald, lips of ruby and a magical heart,

dreams can come true as it did in this final chapter.

The prince and princess lived happily ever after.

-Lisa Andrade

© 2010 Lisa


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This is very clever and very beautiful. Well done!

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Posted 14 Years Ago


While I treat fairytale as a cliche in the literature world, I see your poem as an interesting blend of fairytale and great writing. Amazing how you simply interchanged the last words all throughout and yet still come up with something sensible. More than that, you've managed to put them all together in one line right before the end, which of course made the end a lot more captivating. Good Work.

Keep Writing. ^___^

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Posted 14 Years Ago


wow! believe me while i grew up and watched all these fairytales movies with different storylines, this piece seems to encompass them all...short but deep, well penned and so "wow" that the imagination so quickly and easily paints the story in ones mind.

writerscafe has a new force to reckon with, lisa, while i welcome you i'd like to say its a great piece....double thumbs up

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