Eczema and Erosion

Eczema and Erosion

A Poem by 106becky
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Short and bitter, written years ago.

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Cracked, red raw
   sore.
     The flesh of my feelings-
you rip through them once more.

It's called erosion, my friend.
      
       End.

© 2012 106becky



Author's Note

106becky
Written years ago in the back of my diary. I quite like how the words just trip along and how it's so simple, but then is it too simple and am I just too used to reading it in a certain way? I feel so basic haha :|

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Added on April 5, 2012
Last Updated on April 5, 2012
Tags: cracked, red, raw, sore, eczema, short, rhyme, iambic, lyric, flesh, gore, erosion

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106becky
106becky

London, United Kingdom



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I don't write much, or very often, and not particularly well- but a problem shared is a problem halved ;) more..

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