what did i do

what did i do

A Chapter by Ashley.M.E
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I mde this when i was 12 so it's not that good

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What did I do to make you so mad at me

I can not see what happened to me

Why willn’t you look at me

Tell me

Did I steal

Did I lie

Did I do some sorta kinda crime

How am I criminal and I don’t know it

If there was just one person

Who cared about people

People like me

Maybe this world would be

A little better off

Why willn’t you look at me

I can’t see what you hid

It’s all a lie

Blame me

If that’s what you wana do

I’m tired of wandering

What’s happening to you

Tell me, tell me

Did I steal

Did I lie

Did I do some sorta kinda crime

How am I criminal and I don’t know it

If there was just one person

Who cared about people

People like me

Maybe this world would be

A little better off

Why are mad at me

Tell me it could be

You think you know me

Baby came on and say

I’m tired of playing

I’m tired of hiding

Tired of crying

You seem so upset

And I don’t what to do

Your mad and I’m am just the fool

What did I do

What could I have said

You think you know who I am

You act like it’s all my fault…

Tell me what did I do

It had to be me…

Did I steal

Did I lie

Did I do some sorta kinda crime

How am I criminal and I don’t know it

If there was just one person

Who cared about people

People like me

Maybe this world would be

A little better off

Because you don’t care

 

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© 2010 Ashley.M.E


Author's Note

Ashley.M.E
I don't think it's that good I tried to write it the way I remember it, It's not the same, Sadly I lost the copy I made... I remember most of it

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Been a while sense I read something of yours! I forgot how much I enjoyed them!!! Beautiful just beautiful we all do things in life some proud some not so proud...Nicely done!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really enjoyed the ending. ;p

Posted 13 Years Ago


This. Is. EXCELLENT. One of my favorites by far. It has a flow like a song, that's what I think at least. It's got good word choices.
Reminds me of what a little child would think if their parents were fighting or were mad at each other and just couldn't find the patience to tell the child what's going on. Very, very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This one I really like, but remember, the title is what catches the attention. ^^ This one is definately my favorite!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well, I think you wrote it very nice. It's emotional and sad. I totally like it ^__^

Posted 13 Years Ago


good work!i like it alot i know what u wanted to say and remember the inspiration come once not twice other then that good work

Posted 13 Years Ago



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