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Broken

A Story by 13.9
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For the Twitter Fiction (140 characters) contest: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/8350/. This story is 140 characters exactly, including punctuation and disregarding spaces.

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       "Some days, I feel so lost here," she whispers from her perch on the swing set, bare feet dangling in the sand. 

        I bite my lip, but don't answer.

        She never mentions it again.

© 2009 13.9


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13.9
Any review/comment is still appreciated. Thanks.

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Really nice, poigant (is that how you spell it???) piece. Beautifully written and well presented, I connected well tp both characters, good job!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Congratulations for winning the Twitter contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


great! hope you win the contest xD

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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