Look You Just Need Friends.

to close those beautiful eyes,

Look inside.

to believe in yourself,

You don't want their help.

to chase a dream to be everything,

Just to whisper one thing.

to cry yourself to sleep every night,

     Need a good dream, a goodnight.

to try to make them see your pain,

Friends try to help you stay sane.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

some very clever word usage and some highly provocative thinking, this works well, in spite of the obvious rejection of help from outsiders, i think it's touching and poignant. sometimes we all go there though...in your defense. sometimes we just want our own special little universe..if this was your message, it worked.

[Mary Chalmer]

An excellent piece of work

[Smokey]

I really like the meaning and the layout. They way you formatted this made it even better than it would have been if it was formatted normally.

[Forevermore]

i like this, it has truths and motivations in the message

[♋ Iris ♋]

I like the layout of this. It speaks a true message as well. Thank you for posting~!

[Humor Me]

short and sweet !

[Ellen Brook]

Really - friends are the most precious jewels of our life and you expressed this in a very subtle manner. Good !! Keep it up.

[Ayaz chandio]

very nicely described...quite a wise and meaningful,

[SuicidePact.]

The layout was really cool. I liked this alot!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very cute :)

[Midnight Queen (Amanda)]

some very clever word usage and some highly provocative thinking