Hi or Hey

a simple hi or hey

makes my day

when it comes from you

but it hurts too

i love you still

against my will

in way too deep

these feelings i shouldn't keep

i want you back so bad

you don't because i make you mad

i'm not the girl you want

i stand here giving you everything and it is still not enough.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I just read an article by a guy who
just worshipped his girl and she did
him wrong. He got to wondering why.
He found out.
Some women (his) have a sex thing about
abusive men. They dont enjoy the nice
guy for the same reason.
Sorry---
---- John

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very good poem. I can relate to this a lot. Excellent write.

[特殊]

This is so sad...I wish he didn't treat you so crappily, I know you love him like crazy...it really says a lot in a few lines. Good job Taya.