At our  fire

At our fire

A Poem by WRITER-----------POET

Creation at one day
Love , have to stay
You are women
Came from sea foam
From my dreams
Beautiful clothes at north breeze
Smiling on my teeth
Kissing at erotic heat
Holding at heart beat
Prayer for new seed
Naked river with your body
At your soul, is so sunny
So deep open space
Feel your kiss on my face
Leave that trace
It will never vanish
Eternal wet symbol
Candle on each tree
Clouds are at orange blue
Here is it you
My love still around
Still more closer
Every day like one step
Close each other
Close to wedding day
Close to reality





All troubles will be gone
All wil melt at our sun
All will bring freedom
Statues of all saints
On old bridge
At lights of gas lamps
Reading poems
Holding hands
Feel common sense
Maybe shall we dance
Walk on top of the fence
At windows old French jazz
Cats make love on the trees
Time of wonderful deeds
Time go at our way
Time open next chapter
Laughter after
Morning is better
When we feel rested
But we can rest at afternoon
Now is time
For travelling to the moon
Or maybe honeymoon





© 2017 WRITER-----------POET



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There is a euphoric joy in your words that delights the romantic in me, like a butterfly flitting from flower to flower.

It was wonderful to meet you!

Posted 7 Months Ago


WRITER-----------POET

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much. I am happy my poem have this impact on you. it was wonder meet you as well.
' Laughter after ~ Morning is better ~ When we feel rested ~ But we can rest at afternoon ~ Now is time ~ For travelling to the moon ~ Or maybe honeymoon '

I felt like cheering at that last word! Your first stream is one of sadness yet hope, gently put in your very special style. The second steam is like the slow arrival at a longed-for destination. Beautiful.. the romantic in me loves every word!

Posted 7 Months Ago


WRITER-----------POET

7 Months Ago

Thanks again for visit. Yes i wanted write about hope. Even those days I feel realy down. I know soo.. read more
emmajoy

7 Months Ago

Hope is a precious gift we all deserve.. and you surely do, my friend.
WRITER-----------POET

7 Months Ago

Thank you emmajoy very much.
A lovely romantic reverie, filled with sensual delight and a loving for the soul's fulfillment and tranquility... Your words capture the dream beautifully... Alas, we have to awake to reality..

Posted 7 Months Ago


WRITER-----------POET

7 Months Ago

Dear Jibey thank you so much. you find so many amazing stuuf at my poem. That s feel realy great.
Jibey

7 Months Ago

I'll try to read more when I find time... Have a try at reading some of mine... if it's not too stea.. read more
WRITER-----------POET

7 Months Ago

Yes i did . I rewied 2 pieces of yours. You have wondefrul sensual creation
Great pics. Feel the youthful beginning of joy and hope. Maybe taking us onwards to the journeys end.

Posted 7 Months Ago


WRITER-----------POET

7 Months Ago

Thanks again for visiting my page. Yes picture can help me to create story. On internet are millions.. read more

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