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ADD messes up my life, this will atleast show you how

time to write a poem for all my fans
i pick the pencil and write the intro
my pencil breaks
where is my sharpener?
damn ,the table is full of books
i take a handful to the library
i cant believe i forgot a cup of coffee in the library
with coffee in it
before anything else
i better take it to the kitchen
speaking of which i have to get mom's grocery
ill do that first
and sort the cup later
i should change the outfit if am gonna go out
into my bedroom i run
disorganised so much it looks like a mall after an earthquake
i wount pick these stuff
except my xbox controller
Put it somewhere safe
but since i have it in my hands ill play for just a minute
its still early 6:03 ,turn the tv on, xbox on
call of duty for 10 minutes
i feel like am in the warzone
s**t! its 8:58 already
i havent bought the grocery
and what is this
what is a pencil doing in my pocket

Author's Note

feedback please

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

if it weren't so debilitating and frustrating ..your poem made me chuckle .. i was thinking all the way through ..Wow! so thats why i am like i am ;) ... and i thought it was old age and lack of patience :) i admire your heart to put this out ... in the open .. it raises awareness and understanding .. well done sir!
E.

[A Humble Poet]

that's as so creative and made me giggle at some points because I can totally relate! Haha! Yeah job!

[Leo]

Another creative writing from an engaging writer who knows his stuff..in the sense, your writing communicates a subtle thing locked in our subconscious, yet you find a way to unlock that thing and make us ponder..I'm gonna call you the subconscious pilot ;), bravo!!!

[3X3MPLER]

haha the subconcious pilot, i like it infact thats the title of my next poem, you are gonna love it :)

[B. Boileau]

You hit the nail on the head. I've raised 2 boys with it and to say life is a challange for them is an understatement. Your words describe them as if it was today. I feel for you my friend. Focus in strife...

bill

[Lauren music97]

This is how I feel all of the time. I like how you put the feeling into words like this. I am new here so I can't really say anything. I think this puts it into words very well.