chapter 1:My name is

Mom named me Richard
they all call me Dic
without a 'k'
am okay
i dont care
am tall dark and handsome
thats why i have uncountable girlfriends
in other words
zero
am intelligent
ignore school tests
they only ask what i dont know
and ignore what i do
bad lack
maybe a conspiracy
i am popular
4813 followers
online
funny that people in real life dont follow me
even my dog doesnt follow me when i walk it
am not a vegetarian
but i love plants
i want to conserve them
thats why
i eat animals that eat plants
thats why
plants love me
more than they love vegetarians
am simple
honest
sometimes blunt
am Richard
they call me Dic
some say i am with a 'k' at the end

Author's Note

have fun reading, more coming soon subscribe to my writing if you like it...i welcome any kind of comments, positive or pointing on my areas of improvements

Reviews

[gabi123]

Right, I don't want to be a nag or anything, and take my word with a grain of salt. Ok, ready? It's. Not. Good. I'm sorry, ok, personal opinion! But, your rhyming schemes, and tempos are seriously out of whack, and you're missing a character, a TONE. Please, take this however, but the best thing would be use it constructively.

[3X3MPLER]

Thank you for your review, apart from poetry am also a rapper, so I can assure you I am really good at rhyming. I don't make an effort to rhyme because I don't actually want my lines to rhyme. That's my way of writing. Kid let me give you some advice, don't rely on rhyme only as a way of showing how good a poet you are there is much more to poetry than just rhyme... I get lots of reviews and hundreds of views with "my character " so I'll stick to it not follow your style which gives you an average of 20 views and if you are lucky maybe a review or two. Read more of my poems and maybe you'll get to know my " character "

[gabi123]

So instead of taking it constructively, you decide to attack a young writer on the internet. All I was trying to imply was the crudeness of your style, because some parts rhyme and some don't. So, with all due respect, I wasn't trying to attack you.

[bhavya]

I guess that is what life is.. full of ups and downs.. regrets and understanding. .

[3X3MPLER]

exactly what i mean. Thanks for taking your time to read it

[3X3MPLER]

thank you. check out chapter 2

[Roselyn Rose]

Enjoyed this piece, feeling happy now :D

[3X3MPLER]

thank you very much for taking your time to read it. More coming soon.

[moivisage]

Humour me more, humour me.

[3X3MPLER]

There is more coming, subscribe to my writing, that way you wont miss anything

[3X3MPLER]

check out chapter 2

[D Connolly]

haha, I love the humor! I don't have followers either... well I do, but one is a stalker and the other 2 are cops, so I don't think they count. J/K! I like how you're just writing about day to day stuff no big deal, nothing too deep. It's a relief. Check out my Cheetos story if you like that kind of thing. Keep writing!! :)

[3X3MPLER]

haha i like your followers...ill check it out

[3X3MPLER]

check out chapter 2