A Little Slam Poetry

A Little Slam Poetry

A Poem by 50centdolly
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Random urge to write out a little frustration towards school.

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This is absurd

In other words

I’d enjoy watching it burn

Everything we learn

Isn’t something we yearn

Teachers’ eyes all stern with fake concern

Their mouths vomit facts

Facts lacking interest

Students end up on Pinterest

Facts expected to be remembered

For a contest

To see who remembers best

See who rises above the rest of the class

And does not trespass

On shortcut’s territory

No

It will be called cheating

It will gnaw on you, eating

Away your fleeting status

I would enjoy watching it burn

School in flames

The place where social chains

Start and grow, enabling pain

I hope the rain doesn’t drain the flame

That covers the place of hate where we wait

And get irate at the too-full plate

They expect us to finish at a too fast rate.


© 2017 50centdolly



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now this is a slam I can get behind! you got me snapping throughout this one! Well done!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

50centdolly

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you =]
Fudge school, seriously, heh... Social chains and all, love the beat-slam-type this has to it... Remember only the best rise above the rest of the class... Good work

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

50centdolly

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much. =]
Silente

2 Months Ago

Of course, beat poetry is some of the bessssst, imo...
50centdolly

2 Months Ago

Haha, I love writing it. I didn't even edit this. I just "slammed" it on paper and posted it. xD
I completely get this, I love learning but school can do more damage than good sometimes. Schools really compare kids too much and I think it can be detrimental.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostinthewaves

2 Months Ago

Yeah i just graduated high school this year, and I'm going off to uni in a few weeks. I still feel p.. read more
50centdolly

2 Months Ago

Good luck at uni!

I'm actually trying to graduate a year early at the end of this mo.. read more
50centdolly

2 Months Ago

And thank you =]

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