With You My Love

With You My Love

A Poem by Alex Hunter
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A little song

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Calling you always fails

Reaching you has no avail

Why must our love be dead?

Is there any way I could be in bed

With you my love

 

Calling you always fails

Reaching you has no avail

Why must our love be dead?

Is there any way I could be in bed

With you my love

With you my love

With you my love

 

 

Calling you always fails

Reaching you has no avail

I still care for you

Why must you make me blue?

Is there anything I could do?

To savior my lovely beau

With you my love

With you my love

With you my love

© 2013 Alex Hunter


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A beautifully penned piece that is full of emotion. Very nice :}

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
The words are bittersweet and honest. I liek the repeating lines. Nice song write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) it's based on true events (sigh) but I'm glad you enjoyed it
You wrote a song. It's bittersweet in words and the love is prevalent and well expressed through honesty. RESPECT>

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your review :) I'm very glad you enjoyed it
very nice write
with you my love...like the repeating line
thank you so much for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) you're very welcome

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Added on February 15, 2013
Last Updated on February 15, 2013
Tags: Rejection, love, needing, you

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Alex Hunter
Alex Hunter

Palm Coast, FL



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I like 80s films, like slasher and teen comedy. I love music from the 50s, 60s, 70s and 80s mainly. I like nature and walking as well. I'm a bassist and long to be in a band. And of course, I love wri.. more..

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