Last First Kiss?

My first, first kiss was something sweet
Kind and warm
Caring
Slowly turned bitter,
Became forced and soul sucking
Two years, i was stuck being drained,
An emotional vampire.
My second, first kiss one I though was in healing,
He found me pretty, though I was broken and lost.
That quickly fell to shambles,
Though we are still good friends he's a rambling man, no good for me.
Then along came three
My third, first kiss unlike the others
There sat emotions so deep I could not reach
So fragile we tiptoed around them for months
Those emotions grew strong
They bubbled to the surface
And remain there each kiss giving them more energy.
Almost two years kissing the same lips
And they still make me smile.
I ask myself if that was your last first kiss would you be happy?
I believe my answer is if I had to go though everything I have just to reach these lips then I'd live it a million times over
He's irreplaceable and I would be glad to have no more first kisses.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if only each kiss could feel like the first...
funny thing though...with all that anticipation...sometimes the first kiss is disappointing...but when it is more than we could hope for, if both sides equally engage and enjoy...the second one is usually even better.
Having been a good Catholic boy in my early years...we had to rely on kissing...so hopefully we got good at it. :)

geez, this brought back tons of memories. Lots of firsts, too many lasts...
j.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you. I'm glad that this was able to bring back memories. Your reveiws make my feel like it's a chat with some coffee.

[Lyrically Inclined]

Sweet innocent story. Nice write!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much for reading

[Planet x]

Interesting , I love that piece

How many first kisses ones have ? You made methink

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you. I think that's what I like In that most people can relate and reflect

[Justin]

that was really well done, u were able to talk about your first time so descriptive :) great job!!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thanks I think this has a lot of editing ahead of it but the emotions I want are there

[Justin]

Your welcome sometimes editing takes something away from it, amazing job!!

[KCthelastboyscout]

Almost sounds like a Goldilocks and porridge situation. I'm glad you found the right kiss in the end.I enjoyed reading this.thank you

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for reading

[Paul Bell]

I suppose it's not so much the first kiss.
It's actually the right kiss at the right time.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for reading

[Gee]

I feel the same about my wife of 24 years, wouldn't swap her for the world.
Really enjoyed this.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thanks so much