True love

I love him truly

I love him wholly 

he may be far off

but even still he handles 

each of my faces 

the good the bad and the ugly

the anxious the scared and the sweet

he handles me when even I cant handle myself 

sweet and caring

he is my sunshine and blue skies

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I think real love is all about the same. To give more.....
If you truly love then you truly care more....

[BlackPrince]

It's a nice poem.
But why didn't you carefully handle the punctuations?

As a writer, you got to be conscious of the proper way of language.
You have an audience, people who read your heartfelt words; yes, it's true anyone can see what you mean, but writing with awareness of vocabulary and grammar will help even you as a writer to better express your ideas. Any subject, work or profession has its basic rules; and so does writing.

Do it like this:

I love him truly.
I love him wholly.
He may be far off,
but even still he handles
each of my faces,
the good, the bad, the ugly,
the anxious, the scared and the sweet.
He handles me when even I can't handle myself.
Sweet and caring,
he's my sunshine and blue skies.


WELL DONE

[Kasey Miriam]

Thanks. I'm well aware. Punctuation and spaceing are my favorite tools.

My care for this poem is kinda down the drain since it was for an ex but this site is to hold all my words so I don't loose them.
Really though thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this poem is such a lift of spirit...showing that real love is being loved no matter the face or the spirit...through the bad times as well as good.
the real ugly of us is beautiful to that person.

j.

[Kasey Miriam]

absolutely, this was written for an ex of mine but I think looking back I was writing for what I yearned for