I'm Trying

I'm Trying

A Poem by TheMizFit
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This was my second attempt to fight depression which wasn't going so well.

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It’s hard when no one appreciates you,

You feel just like a fool.

You try your best

On every challenge, every test.



Is it not enough?

What I try to do?

I feel bad,

Because I have feelings, too



I learn from my mistakes

I take a step at a time,

But everyone seems to drag me down

It’s hard to pretend that it’s just fine



Sometimes I need encouragement

Someone who believes other than myself

Someone who can wipe my tears

Someone who helps me conquer my fears



But is there such person around?

Because everybody drags me to the ground.


© 2011 TheMizFit


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I appreciate you, this was amazing and so are you! :)

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i think everyone can relate to this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very well expressssed

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think it is feelings beautifully penned and expressed. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is expressed in lovely fashion and needs no explanation for it is a subject we are all familiar with. nice job!

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Added on May 12, 2011
Last Updated on June 4, 2011
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TheMizFit
TheMizFit

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