Just You

Someone to lean on,

      someone like you.

Someone who cares,

I think I need someone,

     Someone like you.

You make me happy,

Seeing you smile,

it melts my heart

It makes me smile.

You make me sad,

When you're not there

No shoulder to cry on,

All alone on a corner.

You confuse me,

I don't know what I feel.

I need you right here

Beside me, nowhere else.

Do you feel the same way?

..because I think I'm in love with you.

I need you; not someone like you

     Just you

Author's Note

I'm not quite pleased with this.
Weird how I wrote this while watching Christian's match with Sheamus (WWE)

Thoughts?

Reviews

[quinfinn]

methinks thou hast fallen for someone in a very hard way, beautifully done!
i love love, reading it just makes me love it all the more, and you have captured her essence herein exquisitely...

[Helpless]

awww incredibly touching and romantic

[MaddyHi]

that was actually very nice!! You had one mistake. On a corner, change that to in the corner.I think it would sound a little better than on. But anyway, this poem was excellent! I love how it seemed like you rhymed! Great job. I love rhyming poems. It shows that you have skill and you can seem to put words however you'd like!

[.......]

I like this it reflects to me as someone confused about love and how to feel. I think you did a wonderful write here. Nice job!