Tea Cup Kettle

Tea Cup Kettle

A Poem by Abdul Batin Osman Bey
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Just a moment of Randomness

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Summer in the night tide spin

Looking backwards leaning on the wind

Mouth moving I can’t hear the sin

 

Floating on a back drop out of the rain

Snap pictures feel the flame

Thirsty soda air pop anorexic pup

All I want is mud penny throat candy

Uneasy… picture… mother

 

Summer in the night tide spin

© 2012 Abdul Batin Osman Bey


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"leaning on the wind", sometimes the only thing we can lean on. I do not let people take pictures of me anymore, and all the pictures that existed of me have been 'lost'. . . That's one thing I have a connection to, "Snap pictures feel the flame". The whole poem fits together strangely and it seems like you could still remove some lines, have them separate and they could stand alone perfectly well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

I'll keep that in mind for future writes, maybe I'll separate the lines as a revised version.
Extant

11 Years Ago

Quality over quantity, right? No matter, great write.



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"leaning on the wind", sometimes the only thing we can lean on. I do not let people take pictures of me anymore, and all the pictures that existed of me have been 'lost'. . . That's one thing I have a connection to, "Snap pictures feel the flame". The whole poem fits together strangely and it seems like you could still remove some lines, have them separate and they could stand alone perfectly well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

I'll keep that in mind for future writes, maybe I'll separate the lines as a revised version.
Extant

11 Years Ago

Quality over quantity, right? No matter, great write.
Emotional write love the first three lines and floating on the backdrop out of the rain quite a picture you paint. Lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

thank you very much
Great flow to this poem...nice work, keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

thank you
The first three lines are awesome...the images look random when you first lay your eyes on it, but as you read through it, they come together to paint a pretty emotional picture.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: Summer, Night, Wind, Rain, throat, Candy, Anorexic, Penny, Mother, Picture

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Abdul Batin Osman Bey
Abdul Batin Osman Bey

Cambridge, MA



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