Temple Out

Temple Out

A Poem by Abdul Batin Osman Bey
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about spinning like a Dervish

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Twirling round for days

In a new found haze

Liberated from my mind

The black sparrow turns white

Left with only a gaze

Into our comfortable maze

Let the sun go down to bring the night

 

Shut down

Shut down

Allow your physical self to cool

 

No more roaming eyes

Nothing left to breath

How many stars have burned up in this second?

Captured slightly out of time

Reversing the process of rewind

Moments flicker in tune with the hollow earth

 

Shut down

Allow your physical self to cool


© 2012 Abdul Batin Osman Bey



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Abdul Batin Osman Bey
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very well done poem about a fascinating faith twisting and turning in a captivating trance.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Abdul Batin Osman Bey

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoy it, I tried my best to convey the overall feelings of the Der.. read more
The whirling Dervishes , complete faith and dedication in a trance . Lovely write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Abdul Batin Osman Bey

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoy it
Very cool...I like the rhymes and the pace, which does give the impression of spinning, at least how I read it lol

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Abdul Batin Osman Bey

5 Years Ago

Cool, I like when people have an effect to the poem, I want people to get in the poem. I'm glad you .. read more
Great poem...
Fantastic use of discription...the spinning, and rewinding made me feel dizzy, and then being grounded at the end.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdul Batin Osman Bey

5 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

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Added on September 17, 2012
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Tags: days, haze, white, gaze, maze, night, eyes, breath, second, hollow earth, cool, physical

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Abdul Batin Osman Bey
Abdul Batin Osman Bey

Cambridge, MA



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