Making me....

Making me....

A Poem by Ace Jaxon

Truthful goodbyes, make me leave faster

Grateful hellos, make me sob louder

Silent screams, make me see the world clearer

Sunny skies, make me think all is good

Stormy days, make me think of your thundurus eyes

Thunder and lightning, makes me petrified

Unable to move, I find my heart reliving

The old death, makes me live longer

Life, makes me happy to see

The sight of the world is

Unreal and fades

© 2018 Ace Jaxon


Author's Note

Ace Jaxon
Sorry I haven't wrote anything in a while.

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this is really good ne keep up the good work

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've never read anything like this. It's really good. My favorite line is "Stormy days, make me think of your thundurus eyes"

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

yeah, i try to make all of my works real , and related to me
Lavi

6 Years Ago

It's the best way to write, after all
Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

true, true

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Added on January 25, 2018
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Ace Jaxon
Ace Jaxon

Dassel, MN



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Just a learning poet and a writer with a story to tell... more..

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