IS THIS DEATH??

JUST A SIMPLE POEM ABOUT HOW DEATH OF A HUSBAND AFFECTS WIFE

I LAY LEADEN AND OUTRAGED

YOUR MEMORIES HAUNT ME

I LIVED WITH YOU AND FOR YOU

BUT........

YOU LEFT ME

IS THIS DEATH??

NOT ONLY YOU WENT

YOU TOOK AWAY MY HAPPINESS ALSO

I ENJOYED THE PLEASURE OF BEING YOUR WIFE

I  KNOW THAT YOU LOVED ME

BUT WHAT SEPERATED US?

IS THIS DEATH??

YOU IMPERILED YOUR LIFE

AND SO YOU ARE NO MORE NOW

WE WERE REALLY INTERTWINED

YOU SHOULD HAVE STIFLED YOUR LIFE

WHY DID YOU RAFFLE IT?

IS THIS DEATH??

YOU WERE A RACONTEUR

THE STOUTHEARTED MAN WHO CALLED ME SWEETHEART

I AM TOTALLY UNNERVED

I AM DYING EVERY SECOND

I HAVE BECOME A STONEDEAF

YOU STOOD WITH ME IN EVERYTHING

BUT YOU LEFT ME NOW

IS THIS DEATH??

FINALLY....

I KNOW YOU WILL HEAR ME

YOU CANT LEAVE ME

YOU WILL RETURN ONE DAY

SPENDING MY DAYS IN THAT HOPE

WITH LOVE.............YOUR DEAR WIFE

Author's Note

I HAVE TRIED SOMETHING.......ANY CORRECTIONS PLEASE LET ME KNOW

Reviews

[Solar]

Your use of capitals throughout - was that a deliberate choice?

[ADITI]

Thank you....thanks a lot

[Alexanda Corrin]

Interesting poem. I like the befuddled emotions that you conver in it!