AM I RIGHT OR WRONG??

AM I RIGHT OR WRONG??

A Poem by ADITI
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Just tried giving a social message....

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AM I RIGHT OR WRONG??

PEOPLE CALL ME ISOLATE
I DONT HAVE ANY ISSUES

BECAUSE I DONT WANT TO LIVE IN IVORY TOWER
I WANNA BE SOCIAL

I AM AN INTREPID
I WANNA CHANGE EVERYTHING

BUT I AM WRONG IN OTHER'S VISION
I AM AN INTOLERABLE PERSON FOR EVERYONE

THEY CANNOT RESIST ME
THEY WANT TO GET RID OF ME

WHEN I OBEY TRAFFIC RULES
THEY MOCK AT ME

IS IT A THING TO MOCK AT??

WHEN I OPPOSE INFIGHTING
THEY SHOUT AT ME

IS INFIGHTING A GOOD THING TO DO??

WHEN I PREVENT A HIRELING FROM HITTING SOMEONE
THEY SAY IT IS NONE OF MY BUSINESS

WHAT IF THE SAME SITUATION HAPPENS TO THEM??

I HAVE THE GUMPTION TO CHANGE THE SOCIETY
I HAVE THR GUSTO

BUT NO ONE SUPPORTS ME
THEY HAVE THEIR WORKS

I DONT WANT TO BE A PERSON
JUST TALKING SOCIAL ISSUES
AND WASTING TIME

I WANNA MAKE THE CHANGE
AND BE THE CHANGE

I WONT LOOSE HOPE
I WILL CHANGE EVERYTHING ONE DAY OR THE OTHER

IT MAY TAKE TIME
BUT THE CHANGE WILL BE PERMANENT

© 2015 ADITI


Author's Note

ADITI
First time I have tried giving a social message....please convey me if there are any mistakes

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My first impression was wow!
I can feel the eagerness, passion for change with a zest for enlightenment and making it permanent..
You sure do write with a lot of enthusiasm..Keep up the great work !!
maria

Posted 8 Years Ago


ADITI

8 Years Ago

thank you....thanks a lot maria.......-aditi
maria  ( rose)

8 Years Ago

my pleasure..:)

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ADITI
ADITI

MADURAI, HINDU, India



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