The Mirrored Dock

The Mirrored Dock

A Story by ADanielaHD
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How broken objects reflect us

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Here I lay, on a broken dock in the middle of the Caribbean Sea
Saddened by the idea that I am the same as this broken structure
Although they were different kinds,
Just like this withering wood, 
I have been damaged by a tsunami too

I have been hit by waves of your unrelenting words
I have been suffocated by the despair you placed on me from the expectations I could not make
Pieces of me have crumbled
Over your constant analyzations of my honest mistakes

Like this desolate dock, you have made me feel left behind
You have made me feel broken 
And you have deprived me of an ocean
That would have given me peace of mind all the time

But one thing that this mirrored object beneath my heart has reflected to me, 
Is the fact that, as beat up and tortured as it was,
It is still standing

Even though I have been broken
Even though I have been drowned by the disappointments you have instilled 
I am still standing
I am still me
I am still my own person, and that,
Is the most important thing that I could ever be

© 2015 ADanielaHD


Author's Note

ADanielaHD
Please read and let me know what you think! I'm always looking to get better at writing and would really appreciate the feed back! Thank You :) -Daniela

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Added on January 6, 2015
Last Updated on January 6, 2015
Tags: poetry, reflection, life, rise above, be yourself, broken, risen, happy, sad, dock, the, parent

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ADanielaHD
ADanielaHD

San Marcos, CA



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Sometimes I think I can write well.... I love to Sculpt I love to sing I love my sister I love my dog And if you don't like dogs I can't fwy more..