F**k It All.

F**k It All.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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F**k It And Leave It Breathless.

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F**k you, 

f**k it all, 

f**k yourself.

F**k this world,

 f**k my existence, 

f**k it all.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Writing is the best release for this rage!
Keep venting!

~M.Babu~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Powerful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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TJ
Very intense! Very gritty! Loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's intense, and primal. It's the poetic equivalent of a caveman grunt.

Posted 12 Years Ago


No room for error in this poem. Direct and the point is very clear. Anger can be a good thing. Use it to do something good for your self. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very, very much reminds me of Slipknot's 'Surfacing' which goes like;
"F**k it all, f**k this world, f**k everything that you stand for."

For that reason, I would suggest branching out. Clearly there is unresolved emotion you can use to spew out verse after verse of angry rants and poetic rage. This piece alone, like in Slipknot's song, is good as a connecting piece or course, but as a stand alone I feel it lacks. I want to see more of WHY you feel this way. 'Tis all just my opinion of course :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this, very strong and powerful and intense. I can really relate to this. I can tell you're sick of the world. It deffinitlly shows thorugh this

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 31, 2011
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