Oh Darling.

Oh Darling.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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You lied to me from the very get go.

F**k you.

Oh Darling, don’t you f*****g lie to me!

You meant something to me!

F**k it all!

I don’t need you!

Leave it all behind!

Darling, get your fat f**k out of my sight!

You take your time, I’m only dying.

Time is what destroys me.

Hell, I don’t give a s**t anymore.

I trusted you with my life!

Hell, I shouldn’t.

Your broke me into pieces!

“I didn’t mean to… I’m so sorry… please… forgive me.”

As if.

It’s not the first time.

Yet it will be the last.

You know how to break me.

You have to use that ultimate weapon.

Did you guess it yet?

Well,

You will.

“What’s up emo-girl? Did you try to kill yourself today?”

What about now?

Do you know what deadly weapon she used?

Well, okay, I’ll tell you.

Words.

Words are her deadly weapon.

The only weapon she know I can’t handle.

She fucked me over once more.

F**k you darling.

You lied to me once again.

“I can’t live without you Heroine… Please… Forgive me.”

Oh darling, don’t you f*****g lie to me!

 


“Damn Heroine, you’re sick.”

Thanks for pointing it out.

I really don’t care.

You shouldn’t care.

Not anymore.

“You make me wanna throw up.”

I don’t care.

Not at all.

You’re a puppet in Devil’s servitude.

You’re controlled by Devil himself.

A shoal of insult flows from you.

I don’t give a s**t.

F**k you darling.

F**k you.

You can’t control me.

Not ever.

I’m my on my own.

I won’t be a f*****g puppet.

I, A Fallen Heroine, will rise in the pool of your blood.

A Friendship should be based on trust.

But I guess ours was based on lies.




Listen up darling, this was the LAST time you lied to me.




Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 11th Of June.

Dedication: Way Too F*****g Personal To Say.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

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This was such a awesome piece. I loved the anger spewing in this from your words. You could feel the emotions definitely. Whoever hurt has a real strong woman on their hands. This is an honest piece as well. If people are like that you need to turn away from them. Good write. Keep up the good writing. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Absolutely LOVED IT! Such honesty, keep it up.
Love you and your still a risen heroine in my eyes Hun!

~Namelezz~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very direct, and honest words. I wouldn't have used foul language in the poem if it was me. I personally feel like it distracts from the writing. It's hard to get into a poem written like this. I can see your frustration, but there are other words you could use to show the quality of your works. Overall I think its a good poem, but just needs some work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the direct and honest words. Better to leave the people who have disappointed us behind. I like the word "darling." Those cute and nice words from another generation. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Man there have been so many times i have wanted to say all of this this a really strong poem. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Strong words
This is the coolest thing I read

Posted 12 Years Ago



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