You're All I See.

You're all I see in my dreams

Never felt this way before

This feeling's so different

It feels so real

Nothing can be compared to this!

 

I've never felt so alive

Nobody really tore down my walls

Yet you did it with no complication

Like it never really protected me.

 

Before you; my heart was shattered...

Shattered as a broken mirror

I couldn't find all of those bloody pieces

You took a glue;

Picked up the pieces

One by one you glued my heart back together.

Reviews

[Cat]

This is so sweet. It's good to find someone that can pick up the pieces, just as long as the glue is strong enough to hold things together :)

[MoriartyMesa]

Don't take this the wrong way, because this was very good. But it sort of made me feel a tiny bit old LOL, at least for myself it sort of reminded me what it was like to be 16 (not that I am saying your a kid or nothin) but i see a lot of youth in this. And when your young you have that power us older one's do not.

Youthful expression, can not be bought over the counter, online, or prescribed, but only comes in youth.

[sfg]

This is so sweet :) Lovely. I'm glad you found someone to mend your broken heart, not everybody's that lucky ^^ Good job as always.

[Daytonight]

A beautiful love poem. Well done! Keep up the good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem of love. Sometime we are lucky. Find someone kind and gentle to make us strong again. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[hmm]

Awwww so sweet, one of the most sweetest writes I have ever read.
I liked this one alot...awesome write.

[Jeremy Baker]

Honest and direct, and somewhat introspective. Well written.

[Mark]

I like it. Sounds being more honest than you thought you could be about someone. Maybe another piece about what you fee like, at the same time? :-)

[Desmund Tiny]

a lovely poem.......this poem shows that you're deeply in love with someone.... so sweet.... ^^,