You Tore Me Open For The World To See.

THIS IS NOT POETRY!! I WAS INSPIRED BY ALL THAT REMAINS!

How could you do this to me?

Tore me open for the whole world to see

I shouldn't have expected any light for me

As I once said:

“Light won't show that long.”

Now that you watched me bleed...

Did it mean anything to you?

As you saw what I'd scarred onto my arm?

My feelings are sore

My nerves are flayed...

What shall I do;

What shall I do to make you see what you mean to me?

You tore my chest open

Riped out my pounding heart

Scarred it open, just to see my bleeding heart

Threw it to the ground, just to stomp on it

Now that it's all bleeding and broken

Why don't you just kill me;

Kill me now, I don't want to feel this pain

I can't overcome

I can't cope...

Please... put me back together...

How did you think I would feel?

Happy?

Of course I am hurt...

You just walked away...

Left me crying with a broken heart

Rain's pouring down...

Smashing against my cold wet cheeks

I can't really control the tears

It's like, they're living their own life

No matter how hard I try...

No matter how much I want to...

I can't stop the tears from falling..

Author's Note

Ignore any grammar issues.
This is not poetry... As I said in the describtion... I was inspired by the band All That Remains, if you wanna know what song "The Waiting One"

Leave your honest opinion as always.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. I could feel the stress and emotion in every line. When love goes wrong. Hard to find happiness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Layla Anne Massaro]

This is very emotional. I love the ending in this piece. You expressed yourself here perfectly, great write.

[CherryBomb]

You know what i love about writing? One person gets inspired from another.. who inspires another(me).. very inspiring!

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

It's tearing me down through the mess you've shown and I feel it to the core. Very impacting, powerful and substantional. Love it a thousand times over, as much as you. I know the feelings well and it's like a wet hot knife to the heart, a punch to the face, braking skin and blood gushing. powerful indeed. Nice write to the bone.
100/100

[Desmund Tiny]

sad but this piece is really great..... It has a big impact to me...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I like this emotional piece....

Packs a real punch....