Still So Sore.

Memories remain

In a heart left in pain
Felt this before
Yet I am still so sore
Flames closing in
An urge right beneath the skin
Wanting to break through

Because I can't live without you
Standing on the edge
Wishing I was dead.

 

 

 

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.
Date: 3rd of February.
Dedication: Jacob..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Issues.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

A few needs of editing, but over all the words stand on their own in a nice form and flow.

[Ruth]

I have always said that honesty in a poem from the heart and understanding always makes the poem reach out :)
This is lovely, melancholy and raw emotion xoxo

[Jeremy Baker]

I know this feeling, remember it all too well. It passes, but that doesn't stop it hurting like hell hrere and now. I hope writing about it is a catharthis for you. Thanks for sharing!

[Desmund Tiny]

This poem has a great flow and the message too.... great write....^^,

[SilentDreamer]

Honestly pretty awesome. Perfect flow

[stars are far]

Soo well greatly amazingly done..

[Sleeping Maiden]

Powerful piece! I love it.
It is hard when pain overwhelms us.. hope your heart will heal in time.
I love the emotions in this piece. Great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong emotion in this poem. Description bring back to life sadness and disappointment. No weakness in this poem. Just a emotional ride in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a really nice poem. I could feel your pain in it. I know it's hard to be in pain all the time. Thanks for sharing.